i had to do a poem for english class tell me what you think?

don't let the long hair fool ya
i am a dude, booya
i may wear my little sister's jeans
but i have more junk than you do
flying high on a kite
and don"t want to come down
wish i could go with it,
but my body is lying on the ground
holes ripped in my jeans
and scabs on my knees
bruise on my head
wish i was dead
then i date mary jane
it takes all my pain
not good with the ladies
but i can rely more on my board
yes i enjoy pushing wood
i bet you wish you could
so with my mary jane
and my beat up board
i skate off into the night

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I don't know about you, but my English teacher would freak out if she saw references to drugs and death. Then again, she was old and scary.

I like it - be sure to post it in the Poetry section of the forum...

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thi is my english teacher is teaching. she kinda laughed

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it sounds more like a rap to me than a poem
maybe you should add in a few beats and turn it into a song
I'm sure it would sound cool :D

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i didnt mean for it to sound like a rap honestly i dont like rap

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my english teacher would hand it back to me and say what were you thinking. I think it is pretty good what style of poem is it and what grade you in?

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its called i did it 5mins b4 class style of poem and i got 100 booya

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lol this is a poem i did for my english class


Rollerblading is fun
Rollerblading is cool
I rather rollerblade then go to school
I roll all day
I roll all night
I rather roll then get in a fight
I have fun with my friends
I have fun when i roll
I have fun skating the bowl
I like to have fun
I like to skate
I dont like when people hate

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lol that is really awesome

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i like to call them stickflippers

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lol, okay. I don't dislike skateboarders.

But my brother likes to call them "Pine Pussies"

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Dude WTF was that man i skate to but i mean come on dude u call urself a woodpusher and talk about ur "Mary Jane" thats just week that u gotta do that stuff but o well ur life man. but otherwise sweet poem and i reely apricieate the procrastininating. BOOYAH lol

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it was jush a poem for engish cass and some of it was just for rhyme. plus im a chick and im straight edge ok i just have stoner friends.

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